AI Draft
| # | Dur | Action | Problem |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | 3s | Drone over coast | Wrong scale |
| 2 | 4s | Macro water bead | Useful |
| 3 | 5s | Crab reveal + title | Too much for one shot |
| 4 | 6s | Type over ripples | Useful |
| 5 | 4s | End card | Totals 22s |
Week 05 demo artifact
Tide Pools: AI Draft vs Producer's Edit
Treatment
A 20-second festival title sequence where tide pools feel cosmic at tiny scale: surface tension, slow reveals, macro detail, restrained type, and sound that moves from hush to granular clicks.
Producer's Edit
| # | Dur | Action | Margin note |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | 2s | Black water surface, title breathes in | Starts at scale |
| 2 | 3s | Macro bead trembles | Keeps the strongest idea |
| 3 | 3s | Shadow passes under surface | Simpler than crab reveal |
| 4 | 4s | Type tracks a ripple line | Readable motion |
| 5 | 4s | Quick texture montage | Merged three weak shots |
| 6 | 4s | Title resolves, sound drops | Total = 20s |